I will paste the details from today's handout in this post and then your story should be double-spaced, print out and between 300 and 350 words. Bring the completed paper to the beginning of class on Wednesday.
Basic story lab
JOUR 270
Write a news story based on the following. Assume that the story will run statewide in tomorrow’s newspapers.
The Montana Highway Patrol reported the following today:
- There was a school bus crash early today on U.S. Highway 91 near Judith Gap, Montana.
- The bus was heading to the State B and C wrestling tournament in Billings.
- The accident was discovered by a bus of Fairfield High School wrestlers, who were on their way to Billings for the tournament.
- Some parents of the wrestlers were following the bus and they arrived on the scene early, too.
- Fergus County Sheriff Tom Kilham was among the responders. He said the coaches did a pretty good job of keeping people calm. “The coaches had things pretty well in hand by the time we showed up.”
- Warmer conditions had covered the snow-packed roadway with a watery glaze.
- Uninjured wrestlers were taken by a bus from Lewistown to the wrestling tournament.
- Trooper Kelly Mantooth, the investigating officer for the Montana Highway Patrol, said four people were injured.
- The 49-passenger bus carried 16 people: a driver, two managers, three coaches and 10 high school wrestlers from Cascade and Simms high schools.
- Two of the injured were wrestlers, one of whom was flown by helicopter to a Great Falls hospital with a possible neck injury. He was later discharged. The other wrestler suffered minor injuries and was taken by ambulance to a Lewistown Medical Center, where he was treated and released.
- The accident was attributed to slick roads and high winds. The driver lost control about nine miles south of Eddies Corner.
- The other two injured people were a coach who suffered a broken arm and an unidentified person who had a minor head injury. The coach was treated and released at Lewistown. The other person was treated and released at a hospital in Harlowton.
- The bus spun clockwise, slid off the road, went through a ditch and a fence, and then rolled onto its left side.
Keep in mind structure and write a strong lead.
Good luck.
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